First draft

Today, we presented this first draft to our media class to get their feedback positive and constructive critesiam for things we could change. Of course, this version that you can see above isn't that close to being finished as in this one we haven't fitted music, are missing some footage due to technical issues and so the plot isn't as clear as we hope to have by the end.This was the main negatives that the class picked out which we already had bared in our minds before we presented it anyway.


We received a lot of positives on our choice of shot types, the bright colours and our use of slow mo/speed up seemed to be a highlight of every ones watch.

After getting this feedback, we went back to our group and discussed it and we know that we still have a bit more editing with things like titles, music and the final scene so we've set a date in the near future for that to be done so soon we should hopefully have a finished piece :)